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Happy Birthday Sweet Shawna

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Her name is Shawna
Miss Shawna Jean
The cutest young lady
You have ever seen

She has a birthday
The 30th of May
This Year it falls
On Memorial Day

My granddaughter
so nice and sweet
She loves to dance
To the hula beat

Gymnastics, great
Tumbles around
Plays the flute
she is so profound

Full of compassion
Honors at School
She always follows
The Golden Rule

This birthday wish
Is just for you
I hope your dreams
Will all come true

I love you Shawna
for all that you are
you will always be
grandma's shining star

Happy Birthday
Is my wish for you
May God be with you
In all that you do


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Shawna I love you sweetheart. I remember holding you when you were only a few minutes old. Now here it it your 16th birthday. I wish you every happiness and hope all your wishes  always come true. I love you and am so proud of you.  Happy Sweet Sixteenth Birthday. Love, Grammy
Written May 27th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    June 1, 2005
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Thank you so much Josh for this beautiful and heartfelt comment. Take care, Sandy.


  • josh-13
    June 1, 2005
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    Awwwww, wow Mom, Shawna is licky to have a grandmother like you. This is a poem she'll always rember. Tomorrows Sorrows Said it all. Love ya


  • beautifulbrat
    May 27, 2005
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    aww Mom this is so sweet! Wow...time sure does fly huh? Give Shawna a hug for me! I hope she has a happy birthday!!


  • May 27, 2005
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    So Considerate.

    This write is B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L... I'm sure it means a lot to Shawna to have a Grandmother so thoughtful. It's very nice of you to write something about her. She seems lucky to have someone to care for her as much as you do. If I were to make a birthday wish on my fourteen candles, I'd wish for someone in my life as wonderful as you. It was very sweet how you described what she was like and how she's grown, yet still your baby. You said that you hope all her wishes come true... well I think she has all she'll ever need with you around.
    Amazing poem...
    Happy 16th Birthday, Shawna!

  • Linda Sue silver member
    May 27, 2005
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    Hi Sis! I guess we both had the same idea at the same time. I just put a poem on my site for Shawna. I hope she gets a chance to see it. Give her a hug for me. Love, Linny

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