God is the air that you and I breathe. He is the music that we all share. He is the Rock beside the pond, he is the pond. He is you, and he is me. Through us he can see. The power he gave us is not to be conceived. He lets us change reality. We build cities, we build roads, we make life easier, we help each other, we hurt each other. He can see…he is you and he is me. We are the divine, that let him see the creation in his mind..We are made in his imagination. He is everything combined. The good and the bad. The only sin is the one you know your making. The dead are resurrect when you realize, when we die it’s like a skin cell off his arm, and a new born is his breath of life. We are the same deep inside. The conciousness, we all have, the feeling we feel. They are the same. No two people experience the same thing when we are here because we are individual. Free will is a mechanism for unadultured creation. Good or bad, in his eyes it’s something new.. the thing to understand, is that we hold the power, to pull heaven from the sky… he knows this will happen, because he made us like him….with all the intelligence that he has within. The clues have been left here, for us to find. Look at our history, it’s how we’re defined. Pain and suffering is here because of us. All the love and happiness will be left up to us. To transform reality, is the end of the bible. Look at the second to the last verse of revelation “He who testifies to these things says, “Yes, I am coming soon.”
Take this literally and read it to your self. Who is “I”
And there were no more tears……..Listen with your heart!
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Just a few of my thoughts....Please comment!
Written May 27th, 2005
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well written, but i most certainly do not agree with you.
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A thought provoking write with a lyrical presentation which may work well as Spoken Word poetry.NB typo perhaps with "eacher" methinks you may have intended each other? I have a belief in God but have serious doubts as to the authenticity of the Bible, who wrote it, Man, who transcribed, Man, who gets the royalties, Man,as much as I have an inherent faith in an omnipresent overlord I cannot have faith in the Bible and yet " to transform reality is the end of the bible " the poet writes and perhaps, perhaps this is a truism,for to transform reality into actuality surely means that each and everyman should be, should be humane as a human being ,being human, and be a good samaritan to their fellow man whatever their race,creed or religion? Maybe not a poem per se but it has a voice, the voice is heard with sincerity, may be it's prose with a nose for nuance, as Shakespeare said, a rose by any other name smells as sweet.
Good luck with your creativity and keep the faith, if faith does you no harm nor harms another,then it harms no one and any religion that harms no one can only be good. I have no qualms with religion per se but only with those things Man does against Man in the name of religion.
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It seems that we view matters on this subject much the same. What is taught by man, and what is taught by the almighty are not the same........Listen with you heart. And believe that the almighty will lead you to believe the truth. Peace
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What's 'eacher'? It begins the fifth line.
I don't agree with a lot of what I read. Yet, I respect you for being brave enough to share this with everyone on this site.
I do like this one particular phrase:
"when we die it’s like a skin cell off his arm,"
That was stellar.
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I believe that I have some comprehension of what you are writing about here. I like the part about skin cell. Never heard it put quite that way before. The only sin is that which causes harm to yourself or another, by the standard you set, the mentally deranged would not be committing sin because they were unaware of their actions as being sin. While I do not agree with very much of what you have to say here, I respect your right to say it. I also appreciate the way in which you say it. Much of it would be considered blasphemy inmost of the organized branches.
Peace be with you.
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Well Aware
I know the feelings of most organized "religions" My relationship with the almighty is unique between us. Blasphemy is the casting of judgment, which I believe that no one of us is qualified to do. Thank you for your deep analysis of my writing, I do think that it may be time to revise some of the statements made....as it has been some time now since I wrote this piece...and we both know that beliefs are revised with the ever growing wealth of knowledge that is given to us. I am in agreement with your statements about sin.......however....can you not agree that these entities are a product of their environment.....which possible was manipulated by others who were fully aware of the pain in which they were inflicting?
THANKS AGAIN FOR YOUR FEED BACK.....AND PEACE ALWAYS -
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One man's blasphemy is another man's spiritual path. I agree concerning the relationship that we have with the powers that be, our personal relationship is far more important than what is indoctrinated . It is very important not to become stagnant in your life, when you stop seeking knowledge, complacency steps in, entropy is a short step away.
100% about environment, we are all products of our pasts. There are quite a few people who find great joy in sowing discord into the lives of those about them. It is being strong enough to rise above the challenges that determines the rest, some are just not either emotionally, or mentally able to. Some people are just born sociopaths, evil exists, as does good, as does every shade of grey in between.
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beautifully written, and some of it even rhymed even though it wasnt a poem. Great write.
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well the thoughts are reaming off the page will a bullet slamming all the way to texas, its like a neil diamond concert... you really just lay it all out there. well done,
its strange, but when i was younger, at the temple, i was always told God was a woman, ah well go figure. learn something new everyday,
heck someone might say he was real next. -
Very good, very meaningful. Now if only I believed in god.
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I highly enjoyed hearing your beliefs expressed here. I don't see things this way, but that is the beauty of the freedom of religion, is it not? I can only hope that you keep believingand find your way to the Gates.
Irrylath
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"....second to the last verse of revelation “He who testifies to these things says, “Yes, I am coming soon.”
I am delighted to hear he is coming. Just so long as he keeps away from me. -
Well I clicked on this to see if you would enlighten me. Not being mean but I have heard this before. Good write though. Blessed Be! ~~Shannon~~
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You are on the right track
God is the Universal power that will grant us exactly what we want. If we are negative we will attract negativity as it is seen as what we desire. If we are positive and want greatness that too will be given to us. It all boils down to the strength of our belief and how much we really want what our God the Universal Father has to offer. It's all there for the taking. Believe and ye shall find. Seek and ye shall find. Knock and the door will open. All very true facts that so many do not understand. We put out there what we get. So be careful what you put out there. Make it good make it true and make it honest and make it just.
You will receive it every time. Dream big dream with faith and bo not utter a negative thought. Through the power of our God the universe will bring you whatever your heart desires.
Many call it the power of positive thinking. I call it the power of GOD who hears all sees all and knows all.
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God is a metaphor
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if you are refering to the intelligence that is literally everything....then it is so.......I don't disagree with your analysis...but what would be a better description of the almighty? I would enjoy to hear your ideas to be expanded upon.
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Thank you for your feedback.
Recently I have come to remember some revelations, that I have pushed below the face that I normally wear. I want people to know what I have found. Because of a mental condition most of what I say to those close to me, are written off. Thank you again, and perhaps in the near future I will try to put these words into a poem. Thanks again for you time. -
Rich with many pearls of wisdom
I see you wrote this in 2005, perhaps your heart is yearning now to edit this into poetic form?
(more could understand it's impact if you did)
Many images came to my mind as I read this!
"Free will is a mechanism for unadultered creation"
captured by there were no more tears..Listen with your
heart."
I really enjoyed the first paragraphs also..perhaps
this is two poems all woven together. The message's
in each should be celebrated-divided.
I too must remember we all need poetic air to breathe.
ears2hearyou
Kathleen just touches of air, and breaks
in the lines, find a structure that speaks to your
heart. ( and don't be surprised if your spirit leads
you to seperate this into two poems)
If more are able to read it and savour it words,
giving them insight and questions for their own spirits
to ask..wouldn't that be worth a few hours of editing?
i hope so.
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Impressed
I liked it, gives a certain flair of imagery (or maybe thats just cuz I picture everything and my imagination is keerazy)
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wow
very thoughtful =]
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amazing
this is good stuff, keep up the good work
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I would love to print this and post it at work for others to read. I will need your ok first. thank u for this.
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I really liked it. It reminds me that even when things son't go just right that GOD is always there for me even when i feel that noone else is.
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This is very lovely, thank you. God is within and with out everything. Before there was anything, there was God... after everything, there will be God. And through everything, there is God.
Thanks for the reminder.
Love and light,
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I believe what you have written. God is everywhere, in every rock every tree everywhere. People need to be reminded of that once in awhile. Well done
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So true. This is a great piece, and should be read daily! lol It is a great reminder that God is always here watching, incharge of everything. This was awesome i love it! And thanks for the comment!!
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Inspiring
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Beautiful. I like how even though it's not a poem, it still rhymes. And I love the flow of it, how reading it just seems to be so easy because of how you wrote it. I love it in general. Awesome job.
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I really needed to hear this .
i often forget and i feel so guilty to that ...this is beautiful thanks you so much .it inspired me
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wow, very inspiring it got me to think of Him in a different way. good work
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People need to be reminded. Very moving.
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