I'm sorry that i acted that way, I'm sorry that i hurt you,
I'm sorry that i allowed my past
to rush to my mind
causing me to loose my temper.
and I'm sorry for the way
that i acted at your house,
both times that day.
I'm sorry that you hate me,
and I'm sorry
that things have to end this way.
so ill simply say goodbye
and say from my heart
that i hope that you do well in life.
i hope that you find that perfect someone,
who will love you with every particle of their being,
and likewise for you,
and sorry that i left,
and I'm sorry that i love you.
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just a heartfelt apology.
Written May 27th, 2005
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Hey boy. Just thought I would read a poem that I thought I hadn't read, but evidently I already had. Anyways, great write. Hope things work out for hte best. Know that if you need me, I will always be here.
Love ya lots,
Joisey -
I forgive you, and yes we can go back out
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Aww this was sweet, nice write. Oh by the way I'm new here so I'm just checking out random poets. So yeah, have a nice day!
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great write. hope everything turns out well.
joisey -
aw mikey!
and not a quick hug, but one of those long life saving ones. i know exactly what you're saying by this poem, and i think you worded it perfectly. the best way to end an apology like that is to say, "I'm sorry that I loved you"
God knows how many times i've said that phrase.
best wishes
-Meg -
awwwww that was sad...it was also really really good ..i loved it.you have a great way with words. That was filled with alot of emotion and you did a really good job. I wrote a poem that was similar to this one.it's called "I'm sorry for living"..check it out some time. again really good job keep it up. never stop writing
-anna-
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Sad...Good job though!
*Rose
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