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Our time is running out

We've transformed this world into a place of grays
With our fumes and our pollution.

This is the way it's going to stay
Unless we can find a solution.

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Pollution is a problem.
Written May 27th, 2005

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  • roguexzia
    May 27, 2005
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    A message that more people need to hear.
    I agree with this whole heartedly.
    Keep speaking truth.
    Great Job!!!!