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Faith is a journey
Not a state of mind!
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The style of this poem was inspired by "jadedivaxx120360xx"
Written May 27th, 2005
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This is a very unsual style I must say that I liked it though...It was simple but it told a story in volumes. Good job and a powerful choice of words.
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i love how you had one word per line yet you got a whole story across. i havent exactly found my true religion yet...im more of a mix of a couple..but i still found this to be very powerful with your choice of words.
great work
by the way..thanks for commenting me too! :-D -
i like the way u put that. could be used as a qoute right? very powerful and full of knowledge. thank u
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by all means
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this is a good poem and i do believe faith is a journey too, well done and good write
thoroughly enjoyed reading this
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Thank you very much for reading.....Though my work is all spiritual.....I don't subscribe to any one religion. My writings are based on what I beleive.....and I can honestly say that I haven't found one religion that exemplifies what I beleive.......I do appreciate your reading my work!
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I like the repitition, and althought I'm guessing based on your other work that this is geared toward the Christian faith that it could really apply to all aspects of life! Continuing to enjoy your work! Hope to see more! -
I love that each line is just one word! Amazing! Yet again, I'mnot one for faith, but I still enjoyed this poem. Keep it up!
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I like this alot, and I mean ALOT!! It's totally true, faith is a yourney. It makes me sad though that some people refuse to take that yourney and to trust God.
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Great
True, faith is a step by step process, line upon line, precept upon precept. It is also an act of surrendering all that you think you have and are, good and bad, letting go of the old so that you can enter into the new that God has for you. Well written, I enjoyed it. Take care,
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this is cool it so simple it is complex. And I can see what your saying. And for the most part i think your right. so over all this is cool you need to keep it up
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I like this one alot, short but deep and complex. Good work keep up the good work.
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Thanks for reading. I'm glad you took the time to look at it!
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I agree... Those last two lines absolutely bring the poem together for me... I really do love that!
Despite I'm not a believer of God I do respect people's beliefs and what they think, after all we can't prove one another wrong can we?
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This is a really great bit of writing, the repetition of revise really makes the final message hit home.
'Faith is a journey
Not a state of mind!'
I love this, well done!
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Bravo
Nice piece that is both short catchy and meaningful; in a sense you have summed-up the path finding your way in the future. every moment you change, because every moment you do something new. Very profound and interesting to read, thankyou for the comment on my nre piece (that was the fastest comment i have ever received on a new post). -
ow wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how trueeeeeeeeee! wow...um..i love this poem! its so thoughtful and honest!?!?!?!
..M-AZIN!?!?!?!...
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