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Threadfall (cinquain)




In flight,
Consuming fire,
Gliding on leather wings
Charring Thread ere it destroys all
Dragons


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Pernese dragons.  Wish I could load a picture of it.
Written May 27th, 2005

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  • Elrenia
    June 2, 2005
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    Thank you. If you know about Pernese dragons, then I think the description is even clearer. Again, thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.


  • care bear love
    June 2, 2005
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    GOod job with the write. YOu have managed to describe a dragon with only a few words. Not what the dragon looks like, but you know what I mean, hopefully. Good job!!
    Casey
    Blessed Be

  • Elrenia
    June 1, 2005
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    Thank you. But, these dragons are not bad. They were created to help man battle an enemy. I wish I could post a picture. Thank you for reading and the nice comment.


  • Xx Alice xX
    June 1, 2005
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    Oh, tis dragons life to frighten the world around, and you have told that in so few of words. I love cinquains, they do show the power a poet can produce in so few of words. nice work , keep it up.

  • Elrenia
    May 31, 2005
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    Thank you. If I can find it, I may, but I keep missing the contests. About the time I find one worth entering, they have ended. Just my luck. I just write the poem anyway.

  • Elrenia
    May 31, 2005
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    To Elvendragon. It is from Pern. A friend made me a dragon icon for my LJ and I returned the favour with a little jingle. I would so love to have a fire lizard. LOL

  • Raye Soleanna
    May 29, 2005
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    You should put this in the Cinquain contest. Fantasy is one of the choices. This is really good and I bet you would do really well. I don't know the link for it, but I have three cinquains connected to the contest. It end tomorrow I believe.

  • Elvendragon
    May 28, 2005
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    Awesome

    Is this from the Dragonriders of Pern by Anne McCaffrey? If so, you completely rock!! :-D

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