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Never Let Go

i knew
you
before
any
of this
was
felt
or
seen
then
saw you
again
and it wasn't
the same
my heart
swelled
expanded
in my
chest
i was
so scared
still am
this love
is all
consuming
like nothing
ever
before
i'll never
let go

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Written May 26th, 2005

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  • cutipie57
    July 20, 2006
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    I can almost see your breath catch in your chest as I read this. How wonderful you described such an all encompassing, and all consuming love. Your choice of words was lovely, as was the flow of this poem. Keep up the good work!