why is it that you cant understand
cant you see the pain you put me through
everytime you mention her name
I remeber the pain
the pain she didnt just put you though
the pain that she still is able to instill in me
the pain you let her make
a pain that threatens to break me and shatter my soul
even though we say were just friends
and that nothings gonna change,
I still feel a loyalty to you, a love I guess you could say
a longing to keep you away from anything that might cause pain
mainly her.
She treats you like shit
but you cant see it
dont want to see it maybe
but its there
Ive listened to you complain,
upset and heartbroken
and it burned me up inside
just much so that Id have hurt her
but no, you still adore her
talk about her everytime
and go to see her when ur supposed to be here for me
its my turn, but I guess she won
my life is torn... an its mainly her...
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Written May 26th, 2005
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thankyou so much, and yes its exactly what im tryin to say, see, where's still friends, I havent completely blown up on him but he still keeps defending her an its killin me bc I rly care for him an he just doesnt see it i guess... idk im afraid I might say the wrong thing an ruin it though so I just thought Id write it down instead an maybe he'll read it an get it.. idk
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Wow way cool!!! I know where you are comming from here. I had a really close guy friend once who kept dating this girl who hurt him and it was hell for me to see him hurt by this bitch you deserved so much less then what she had. I hated her. I still hate her for what she did to him, to us. After that he hated me because I kept trying to tell him about what she was doing, he just wouldn't hear it. I don't talk to him anymore but last I heard they broke up for good. I think this is kinda what your poem is about. I really enjoyed reading it, thank you so much for sharing!
Lost in life,
xshadowxgirlx
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