As I whisper sweet good-bye's to my freshman year
I feel bitter and worthless inside.
My sweet sixteen is growing near
And I still feel so young.
These fifteen years
Went by so quick.
Through the smiles, laughs, and tears
I've learned so much.
People have come and gone
And after all this time
I'm still sad, confused, and withdrawn
I don't think anyone really understands me.
It seems so strange
That in a few years I'll be on my own.
Things are going to change,
And I don't feel ready in the least.
I'm naive, out of place, and numb
Who knows where I'll be in 10 years.
World, here I come..
Watch out.
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Written May 26th, 2005
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GrEaT wRiTe
aww i really like this one!! It describes what every girl feels when she turns 16!! but like pinkcottoncandy said sixteen will be the best yr of ur life.. anyways.. my favorite part is...
Who knows where I'll be in 10 years.
World, here I come..
Watch out.
it's so true you dont know where youll be in 10 years but getting thiers all the fun!! great write!! keep it up!!
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Good job! dont worry sixteen will be the best yr of ur life well for me it was its kinda weird tho u look back and it seems just like yesturday u couldnt wait to be 15 lol HAPPY BIRTHDAY! and enjoy it while u can !
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This is a great peice and its the truth to me....ill be 16 in about 3 mths and its the truth.. it makes me wonder because where will we be in 10 yrs? married? Dead? happy? who knows.. just gotta live.. again thanks for bringing out the truth in life for a teenager.. we grow so fast, and learn so much but we dont know how to survive on our own. the truth is captured.
Samantha
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