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Let's Play Pretend

Let's act like everything's okay.
Let's smile and giggle.
Let's forget our feelings.
Let's try to make ourselves think we've moved on.

Oh, don't worry!
I'm just fine!
Let me smile because I'm sick of the stupid questions!

Fed up with you,
Fed up with life.
Let's play pretend.

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Written May 26th, 2005

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  • summerstorm
    September 26, 2005
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    Eek. :|

  • kryswriter
    June 2, 2005
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    sometimes people do just want to pretend like everything is okay so they don't have to explain why everything really isn't. this poem is interesting because it has a lighthearted feel but a serious message. it works well. good job!