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happy?

Today I was sitting all alone,
when I began to laugh out loud,
beyond all of my control.
It was as if I was flying,
out of my dark depresive hole.
I couldent feel my self,
or feel the troubles in my mind.
It felt almost as though,
I had left my self behind.

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Written May 26th, 2005

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  • amazing magnet
    May 21, 2006
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    this is lovely escapism, sometimes i get like that, and go crazy and jump in puddles


  • roguexzia
    May 26, 2005
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    Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Short and makes me feel as if I had left myself behind.
    Great Job!!