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New Love (Becoming Me)

Fluttering eyelashes imposing on a weakening soul
Urges, temptations proving leathal, no matter
Steal me away, and never come back
Vindicative insulting behavior eliminated
Ungenuine facade losing its vitality
Shadows pass, revealing that sparkling magik
That once had hid so well, deep in the creveses of unyielding emotion
Bottled and stored, pop the cap, as i finally fizzle over the top
The real me is no longer masked, the once cagey pretender is gone
No finagling, no more
I am me

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Written May 26th, 2005

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  • DeathMail717
    May 27, 2005
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    nice

    awesome!!!
    like i said no time love to comment but cant so i only applaud
    *claps loudly several times.. then runs away*


  • Danteku
    May 26, 2005
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    Heehee... seem very happy