I can't get my creative juices
To wrestle with Sand's and with Puce's
I won't be submitting,
I've had it, I'm quitting
- It isn't my fault, it's the Muse's
Author notes
Written May 26th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Color: Puce by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended May 27, 2005, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Limericks! by marmac.
400 points, ended November 9, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Another good one. Happy trails
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I'm not even sure what puce is...I'd think it was some icky shade of green or yellow...but I imagine it's closer to your background color...great limerick.
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Aww
Don't ever quit
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lol that's great. I like the second limmerick much better. It has such lovely imagery. I didn't even know there was a puce. God, I need to keep up.
Edited on Jun 02, 3:20 p.m. because 'shhh'. -
Hey, quitting is not allowed!
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actually i like that one better
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lol! this is cute i was stumped on sand too...i almost didn't get puce. creative!!
illusions -
It could've been worse, I might have gone with....
There once was a fellow named Bruce
Whose morals were terribly loose
the townsfolk all stopped
when his trousers he dropped
as his ass was an odd shade of puce....
PJ
Edited on May 26, 7:05 p.m. because ''. -
Super cute!
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Very cute limmerick! But you gave up much too easily! LOL
ZZZ
Linda
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i giggled
this is excellent a limerick that cuts to the quick
I haven't entered because I am thick!!
oops
that's really bad - sorry!
and like you my muse just aint amused anymore! But i like this from you it is different has a real limerick feel and is funny to boot
shall applaud your individuality...
elaine
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