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still

and
it's said.
it's done:
you
know.
i know.

and,
it wasn't as bad
as i thought
it would be.
but.
still.

that's it.

the end.

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Written May 26th, 2005

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  • theprodigalsister
    May 26, 2005
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    Mmmm... Break-up?? It's excellently articulated. Well done!!