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Gabriel

I love you
can't you see
That when i watch you
i can't breathe

I wish you didn't break
my heart so much
I see you and i start to shake
and i know you know where i wanna touch

You  are so HOT
still you have no butt
But i love you a lot
and i wish i had some luck

Author notes

HEHEHE, this poem i wrote 2-day in class during 7th period because i was soooo bored. as u can tell it dosn't rhyme but w/e!!!! LOL and it's not even funny!!! LOL
Written May 26th, 2005

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  • shouri13
    June 20, 2005
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    kiara this is halarious what you mean its not funny..lol but gabriels a fag but if you still like him w/e and if he EVER hurts you tell him colette knows where he lives and that shes gonna kill him...then you have to tell me where he lives lol


  • Forevers Eve9
    June 20, 2005
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    I don`t think it`s all that funny... LOL J/K I`m just messing with you kiara. Darn I should have hit him. Would you have been mad at me if I knocked his head off. LOL good poem love ya olivia


  • ForgottenxMe
    June 13, 2005
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    this is funnyvery funnyxpecually the last lines. this is great and cute


  • XhiddenxBEAUTYx
    June 1, 2005
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    hahahehe....yeah, it's cute. It is actually pretty funny...the second part, any way! good stuff. I like the part about no butt!lol

  • SouthernBelle09
    May 30, 2005
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    lol well..i dunno what to say about this...its good..lol ,quite funny really,but good write anyway -Laura

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