I sit on cloud nine
Feeling so amazing
From all the love your giving me
Seeing hearts all over
Hearing my own heart
Beat your name over and over again
As if its a broken record
All it keeps playing is your name
Yet as tables turn
Hearts are broken
I slowly find myself on a road
Walking right out of heaven in to heartbroken hell
All round me this time
Is nothing
Its all black and broken
Just like my heart
That was once full of love
I sit here tasting tear after tear for you
My only wish is
That it wouldn't be tears landing on my lips
But a kiss from you
Walking right out of heaven in to heartbroken hell
Seeing another girl in my heaven
Makes me Wanna scream
Makes me Wanna see the bitch hang as she dies
Makes me wanna kill her then maybe kill you
But as I look at you one last time
See you sitting there
With that smile upon your face
I just flick my hair
Walk from heartbroken hell back in to heaven
Author notes
Written May 26th, 2005
A contest entry
- heartbreak hotel ♥ by Captain Obvious.
375 points, ended April 30, 2007, 52 entries
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this was a magnificant poem! [i'm not sure that i spelled that correctly but you know what i mean!] good luck! -Captain Obvious
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ouch, that must have hurt, a major blow. i hope your OK. you must have been really sad when you wrote this poem because it is so emotional and sad
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Its okay yeah it does suck ..I just can't believe I let all this happen
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I'm sorry..It sucks but I will talk to you if you need someone to talk to..maybe I can help..if you want to talk to me...alot of my poems have to do with this exact same thing..
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Yes It kinds is just startin to happen right now
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I understand this poem...Are you writing from your own experiences?..I've felt this way before
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