Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Homesick 2

Why did I finally
Realize-
How much I love
Mom and Dad?

And when did I
Get too old to
Say Mommy and Daddy?

When are you too old
To miss home?
Or cuddling with mom
On the couch?
And why am I
Alone in this
Uncomforting dorm bed?

Sometimes when I
Feel like this
I have to run
To Mike's arms
To get some
Semblance of home.

Author notes

yet another, not so much a poem but a list of things I was thinking too much about.
Written May 26th, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)