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Majesty (Cinquain)




Lofty
And majestic,
Moving so leisurely,
Possessing the grace of faeries:
Giraffes



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Written May 26th, 2005

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  • Forms of Me
    June 29, 2006
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    This is a very nice cinquain. I enjoyed it...I love this form..but you probably realized that by now... Great job.
    LIZ


  • Elrenia
    May 26, 2005
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    Thank you. To me, giraffes are always moving in slow motion. It makes them seem so graceful. Definately unlike me. Thank you for the comment. I cherish every one.


  • quietly burning
    May 26, 2005
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    ah yes, there is no doubt. they do have a graceful "sway". I never saw that coming. Nicely done !