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Watermelon Slice (Shape Poem)

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A watermelon slice lol
Written May 25th, 2005

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  • wiz20girl3b
    January 28, 2008

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    hey

    hi i like that poem and the color but im at school look ing for a shape poem this so i of coufeud me lol


  • pattyann4500
    February 3, 2006
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    I LOVE THIS! How cute the way you have put in the seeds and such. Very imaginative, Mom! Love, Patricia


  • Sherry gold member
    January 20, 2006
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    Yes you told me and I'll try to rework it soon thanks. Me~
    Edited on Jan 20, 11:15 p.m. because ''.


  • Silky Origami
    January 20, 2006
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    I already told you, ha ha!!!!


  • Sherry gold member
    October 26, 2005
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    Thanks sweetie...


  • -Tesoro-
    October 26, 2005
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    Yummy! lol watermelon sounds like really good now..lol
    ~Turtle

  • Sherry gold member
    August 24, 2005
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    LOL well lets have some sis goes and gets the plates LOL hey do you like this on the green or you think the white background would look better? Sis ♥


  • ShaShay
    August 24, 2005
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    Man! Now I need watermelon. This is very good.
    ~~~POO~~~

  • Sherry gold member
    August 14, 2005
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    Oh thanks, do you think it would look better on a yellow background or white rather then the green? Glad you liked it Its more simple but still my creation lol


  • thelordreigns gold member
    August 14, 2005
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    I never saw this poem of yours. I love it. And I don't remember the rainbow one. Love and Hugs -joanne


  • pixelated nonsense
    August 10, 2005
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    Sherry, Myra's right. Your shape poems are very creative (now why didn't I think of that word sooner?). I like them all. You should consider that greeting card option. I think it would be a great idea.
    Kate


  • Sherry gold member
    May 30, 2005
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    Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

  • Sherry gold member
    May 30, 2005
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    Myra, Thank you sometimes I gotta pull cause its the only way to get you moving to read me LOL J/K dear hope I wasn't to hard of a puller actualy we always work the tangels out eventualy huh ? Love ya ♥


  • myrataal silver member
    May 30, 2005
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    Sherry-special

    Dearest Sherry

    How cute and lovely! You make it VERY difficult for me ... How am I to chose the best? These shape poems of yours are ALL so creative!

    Thank you for pulling at my hair to get me over here -- I have been awefully busy lately, and I really did not spend much time online.

    Keep well, dearest Sunflower.

    Love

    Myra


  • Deke
    May 28, 2005
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    Sherry, this is really good; I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for the read.
    Deke/Damon


  • Sherry gold member
    May 27, 2005
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    Thank you glad you liked it. Sherry~


  • BluRosePoet8488
    May 27, 2005
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    Great job!!!

    Sherry...
    Very creative. I like the pic. That is so neat! I'm not one for watermelon too much though. That's my bro! LOL! Great job on this... you take care. Keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~

  • Sherry gold member
    May 27, 2005
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    ((((((((((((Mom)))))))))))))))))))))
    Thank you ♥ ♥ ♥
    Glad you liked it I'm not sure if I can ever make another one?
    I'm going to make you something today so I'll have it shortly.
    Hugs, me


  • Lilredlll
    May 27, 2005
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    cute&refreshing

    Yes this is very cute ...I just ate a slice of watermelon. I luv this shape poem baby girl. I think I'll have another.
    Mama Linda

  • Billbard silver member
    May 26, 2005
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    Sherry.Very creative.Hugs.Gramps.

  • Sherry gold member
    May 26, 2005
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    Dunno yet but if I get down ya way we sure see who can spit a seed a hillbilly or a gator Hmmmmmmmmmm LOL!!! Love ya ♥

  • Sherry gold member
    May 26, 2005
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    Jacki,
    Thanks I'm glad you like this ♥ hope your doing okay dear one. ((((((hugs)))))))))email me if you need to. Sherry


  • Jacki D
    May 26, 2005
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    Very unique and creative. Watermelon takes me back to the days of my youth with the sticky sweetness running all over me. I think you ought to venture out more with your wonderful creativety. Jacki


  • May 26, 2005
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    and who can spit the seeds the furthest?
    liked this, it made me smile and
    the mice were funny

  • Sherry gold member
    May 26, 2005
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    Aunt Vickie,
    I don't think you have I had redone this but when I posted it sometime ago it isn't in my poems anymore? I'm not sure if I removed it I probably did if its not there. Well the background colors and words are different. It was on a red background before. I don't think you seen it really? Its not wasn't in my poem collection in the past several months.
    Love ya and thanks ♥


  • Vickie J
    May 26, 2005
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    very cute, Sherry...I feel like I have seen this one before, did you revamp it? Still very creative like only you can do.

  • Sherry gold member
    May 26, 2005
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    Thanks Sam,
    I have always enjoyed yours though you do them so easy I bet.
    Hope your days a good one. Sherry~


  • Sherry gold member
    May 26, 2005
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    Thanks dear nice suprise hope your mom's better? Thanks again Sherry

  • Sherry gold member
    May 26, 2005
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    Thanks Timothy hope your feeling better. Didn't see you for awhile saw you wasn't feeling well. (((hugs)))Sherry


  • Samplette gold member
    May 26, 2005
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    Yummmy to the tummy...especially with salt and pepper...
    Sam

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