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untitled, with ardor

Your lips;
(Holy passion...)
Keep me wishing, waiting;
Warmth and stormlight, cherished rapture:
So sweet.

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this is choice 15...
Written May 25th, 2005

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  • ravenofdarkness
    June 15, 2005
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    short and sweet *rav*


  • antique
    May 26, 2005
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    i love your word choice .. this is breathtaking .. beautifully written .. thankyou so much for entering and i wish you the best of luck in the contest ......... keep the ink flowing

    ~Aimee