She prances around her living room-
adjusting the out of place,
the sunlight shines in, her blinds open to the
golden rays.
Living alone could never be so great-
no kids,
a job,
no life,
no friends
-but she smiles always
because she knows, when she is lonesome,
I'll be coming over.
Her job stresses her out,
her feet is killing her, she gets home to check
her email- no one has written,
her mailbox filled with only bills
on her couch after a shower in pajamas-
eating ice cream- on the brink of tears.
She picks up the phone
(my phone rings)
I answer
I am over in a matter of minutes,
lying on top of her, dry on the couch,
her shirt pushed up,
her sports bra too-
My lips wrap around her nipples-
she is up quickly- my pants are off
all of her frustration and wants are structered into
a blowjob-
never have she given it so well.
Now, she is bent over the couch,
her pajamas and thong down-
slapping sounds of genitals are drowned
out by her moans-
at the final moment, I pull out,
cumming on her back and ass
I pull up my pants, head out the door,
she showers again,
letting the warm water touch her-
because she knows, he'll be back,
like an erection-on-call
when she is lonesome.
Author notes
Written May 25th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- ~ Playboy Bunnies ~ by antique.
300 points, ended June 2, 2005, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hot and sensual and lonely. great!
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wow but where is my mister lonesome hahahaha! I liked this it surprised me!
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it is
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Just sounds like a typical male fantasy to me!
A horny woman calls you over, no strings attached to give YOU a blow job! Personally, if I was that frustrated honey, you'd be doing more of the givin'
To keep in with the flow of the rest of the piece the line because she knows, he'll be back should surely read 'I'll be back'.
Keep it up
Kat -
Ring my phone!
*grins* Nothing beats a f**k buddy! I loved when I had one, and know that if I was ever single again, I'd want someone to take care of my lonesome nights.
Sexual freedom, sexual rights. How much do you advocate? Are you a member of NCSF? I'm in a group that is a coalition partner. Might want to check it out!
--luna -
thanks
Im flattered, thanks for reading -
Oooh! Wow! Love that "erection-on-call"! Got me all bothered now!
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sexually free
this piece is very free, sexually- as your represent noell,
nice work -
thanks
thank you so much, if you havent noticed, im into sexual freedom. thanks for reading -
WoW! Very hott and sexy! I am at a lostforwordsother then that I think I need aguy like she has
LOL This is veyr sexXxy. It was a very enjoyable piece. You did this without being overly valgur.
Midnight Lace
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thank you so much love and i will keep the ink going
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this is great .. hehe .. awesome imagery and very nicely done and beautifully written .. thankyou so much for entering and i wish you the best of luck in the contest .. keep the ink flowing hun
~Aimee
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Very blunt but very good... Although you need to work on proper grammar (im a grammar freak, Im sorry) But other than that, very nice! Two and a half thumbs up. ^^x
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as steamy as a shower
OH MY! ummm don't know what to say. Very blunt and well (blushes) back in the day I used to be just like her!! I know but thanks to that I am no longer like her. hmm confusing I know but I live alone but I have a child and no job go figure LOL anyways it seemed that there is a tad bit of angst in it? hmm maybe not. Thanks for contacting me through blood month when I write my fanfiction I write so but when I write erotica in poetry it is much different if you would like to read something different read the works of water or waking to passion. nicely done poem! grade A if you ask me. take care
ciao
leala
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