Daydreams seem so real
of the fantasy i feel
Better than real life~
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Written November 23rd, 2002
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I think daydreams are real because they're who we are, whereas the flesh body will be nothing the dreams in us will live on. You're very talented in giving out so much in a few words.
Peace Georgia
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Very vivid and true.
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Sigh...so often the case. Beautiful pic. -
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so very true, you capture the feel so well in this piece Susan.. beautiful senryu...love the pic too, it truly inspires poetic feelings :) -
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They usually are..
Hugs
Pat -
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Thank God for daydreams...they help us cope with reality and help us create a new reality! Lovely senryu and picture!
((Hugs))
Maureen -
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Dreams can be just as real as the physical world...a place to create and manifest, to be close to the universe and the devine...It's beautiful...Blessings, Daoine -
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Lovely, Susan.. and the picture, too. You always post such good work and add to it's beauty with art. I had tons of pictures on my pc but it crashed the other day and I lost everything.... including all my business stuff, fortunatly most of that was backed up to the server so didn't completely lose all of it but most of my personal stuff is gone...
Anyhow, glad you're feeling better and look forward to reading the rest of your new stuff
Dee -
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What a gorgeous pic and beautiful senryu to match, well done!
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wonderful. and what a nice picture. i really like this poem. (really really) :) can not wait for more. blessings and lovestars!! -
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You use such lovely pictures and your words inspire. I am so thankful for your poems. :) -
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Excellent write Susan what a lovely graphic on this one, dreamy write of escape.......very nice hugs hon, Sherry -
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I just love the way your pictures add to your poetry, Susan! Daydreaming is good - try walking with your head in the clouds and your feet on the ground ... and before you know it, those dreams will come true :)
Glad you are better. And thanks for your lovely IM on the snow angels ... Hugs, Myra -
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Sometimes all that we have to fuel us are our day dreams, keep dreaming dear, dreaming and writing and I am sure you can conquer the obsticles before you. Right now my biggest obsticle to takle is my crappy spelling lol.
Blessing for wellness,
Annie -
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Oh so true lovely -tj-
as trouble and torment mar the way
the minds eye sees a clearer day
Edited by coffee-agh on right now because 'upsidedown'. -
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Edited by coffee-agh on Nov 23 because 'doubled up again -bad bug'. -
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awe...beautiful picture...perfect for this and beautiful words...
just lovely
love and hugs
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A lovely one here. -
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Ah, heck yeah...very rarely does the reality live up to the fantasy...but every once in a while, you get lucky and the reality far outweighs the fantasy. Well done. :)
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