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All about you

All those memories, all those dreams
Awaken everyday
My emotions stir up
My heart sways
All about you...

Remembering old times
Wondering about new
Thinking about changes
Hoping for few
All about you...

I have memorized your every feature
I know your heart-warming smile
I miss your dearly, I want to hold, I want to feel
Come back to me...this time for real
All about you

Author notes

This is dedicated to some one very special to me.
Written May 25th, 2005

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  • DeadlyPoetic88
    March 28, 2006
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    hey this is really good. i think that you did a really good job. its really well written. keep up the awesome job.


  • Jenn-Swenson
    June 3, 2005
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    hey i liked this and i have felt like this also but ppl special to me! well written! great job and good luck judging your contest,im in it
    -Jenn


  • s p i r i t song
    May 25, 2005
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    you did a great job rhyming this one! good luck in the contest. xoxo - mandee