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Memories

Memories reopening the wound I once sealed
Wounds growing bigger, when meant to be healed
I feel the pain taking my breath away
I feel the pain of unseen tears
Those scars of hope burn from betrayal
Those burn awake a fire in me. So powerful I can feel your hate
Marks form, from those scars, all over my skin, the bring back those memories and I'm in hell again
It's a cycle of haterd created by your betrayal
What the hell did I do to break our bond?
Unanswered questions pound in my head
Guilt and force surround me, blinding me
Know the truth but my love denies it..and your hate acceptes it
These my memories...of this hell of a life.

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chubby cheeks
Written May 25th, 2005

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  • crownedjewel4Jesus
    June 3, 2005
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    wow, this is really powerful. great job! very vivid details of betrayal, and hatred from bad memories. keep up the good work!


  • Paint this Town Red
    June 3, 2005
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    this is really powerful. well done and good luck x