A tingling sensation running up your spine.
Sending chills to places you've never known.
Energized lips dancing together in their own world.
Giving their partners the comfort and serenity they've dreamed of.
You live by it like it is written in stone.
A whole new self confidence flies, one you've never known.
Without your other half you feel cold and lost.
Your words and thoughts bring peace, safety, and warmth.
Just a glance brings a smile and a laugh.
You'll keep them safe and you'll do it at any cost.
Physical eruptions hit you like storms.
Whipping, tearing, pleading to be released.
Just a cloud light touch, calms them down.
A kiss lightens their angry cries.
And sex makes them cease.
You crave that voice,
You wish for that smell,
You die for a sight,
You depend on that touch,
Hungrily you want that taste.
All of it you'd never sell.
A feeling most don't know.
A power most can't control.
Our majority can't even handle it.
It goes right to your soul.
Author notes
I really liked the way this poem turned out. I hope this is what you're looking for!
Written May 25th, 2005
A contest entry
- Love Beyond Words by BrittDavis.
420 points, ended June 1, 2005, 11 entries
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This is exactly what I'm looking for. It is a great poem. Your imagery is wonderful and the poem is great. Nice, nice job!
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WOW! Beautifully described.
Oh yeah... I believe it is just what she is looking for. At least if I were a judge I think it would be. WOW! Beautifully described. You hit the nail on the head! Best of luck in the contest. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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