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New Found Love

Smouldering compassion, pressed between the eyes of new love
Jittery nerves and senseless composure
Stealing words and hidden glances
Smiling eyes twinkling with newfound glory
Time inadequate, never enough
When what you see is never what you get
(to be continued)

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Written May 25th, 2005

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  • amyb
    May 25, 2005
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    It is a very realistic view of relationships one that many people ten to forget about until its too late. I'm really looking forward to seeing it as a complete piece. I hope that the muse for this keeps on giving you something to write about. Well done

  • Orisis
    May 25, 2005
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    this is a very true comment on the beggining of a relationship, trying very hard to learn everything about the other person, but it is a huge shock when u find outh te bad stuff, i would like to read the rest .