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Final Promise (Cinquain)




My love,
Not willingly
I leave you in this life.
Know that at the gates of heaven,
I wait.


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Written May 25th, 2005

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  • Elrenia
    May 25, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind comment. I appreciate it very much. I do have another poem that is along these lines at: http://allpoetry.com/Poem/947879 It was written after my mother passed on. Death is such a sad event, unless you are sure of eternity. That is the only way I can face it. God bless and, again, thank you.


  • Prince Charming
    May 25, 2005
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    This is beautiful and sad. Sad because to say goodbye but full of love to wait on heaven gate. Our life here is for just a while but there is waiting eternal life after this when we pass heavens gate
    great done
    Herman