I WANT TO BE LOVED!!!!
that is all I ask!
why can't someone just love me
No, not a friend, or family
a boy
is that to much to ask?
Is it so hard for you guys to love just one girl?
I hate you foul creatures
and yet i long for the kisses
and to be caressed
i want to be told I'm beautiful
That I'm the only one
and know it is meant truly
I WANT TO BE LOVED!!!
JUST LOVE ME DAMN IT!
i can see you
But you don't see me
I would die and suffer
Just so you would love me
this is my addiction
and it is slowly killing me
I'll believe
All your lies
Just pretend you love me
Make believe
Close your eyes
I'll be anything for you
Hold me close and whisper words of love to me
Make love to me til the wee hours of the morn
AH! this fairytale has no happy ending
it is all a dream
There is no one who will ever love me
There must be something wrong with me
Am i that broken?
I can try to dance again
If you will only love me!
Please!
I..want..to...be...loved...
Why can't someone kiss me like that and mean it?
Maybe because there isn't anyone who does...
Love is such a battered thing
Warped and twisted
til it's original meaning
is lost...and loyalty is a thing of the past
"get as many girls as you can"
Are all you guys like this?
Please, find me and prove me wrong!!!
Find me and love me
Because i have so much to give
If you will only let me...
I just want to be loved......
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Written May 24th, 2005
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The trouble with boys is they are not ready for love.I hope you find someone soon to hold you tight.A lovely but sad poem of heartbreak, Ros
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cant live with em, cant live without em
sorry yo say..but yeah i agree this is good, you just have to wait for the right one(i know i hate it when ppl tell me that) but honestly? you dont want them if they dont love you, and make sure you dont give away your heart too easily..i learned that little piece of advice the hard way...
great write -
*sigh* i hope the ending will be with all this heh. thanks for your kind words :-) Love ya! amerz
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Oh how beautiful hon, you have penned such emotion on this page, very well done
The calling out to be loved is heartbreaking, but I love the end as if waiting "I just wanted to be loved......" the story will continue with only wonderful things in the furture... All the best sweet one, Love, Annie 
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yeah, just make sure my name stays on it :-)
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Awesome
Omg I love this poem.....can I please copy it as long as I keep your name on it.
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