I see you in the halls
I see you in class
I Wait for you just to see you
Waiting for my chance to say hi
Standing here with these thoughts
Wondering if you really Love me at all
Our few moments together meant the world
Yet did you feel it too
Did your heart beat
Was your mind twirling and tingling
Or was it just me imagining things
Now when i see you
You turn the other way
Did i do something
What went wrong?
I can't stand here and wonder
My heart doesn't want to think
What if I'm not liked
And left alone again
I thought we would be
But i guess I'm wrong again
Being ignored,or are you shy?
Just let me know now
I need to know now
For truly i can't wait. . .
Author notes
Really sucky..i havent written in so long..so i forced myself to write SOMETHING a VERY SUCKY something i might add...i wish i could write it better....after i start up on the writing again ill come back and edit it all....OK!...but plz dont think i am a TERRIBLE writer..im having a blockage at the moment........................................................................
Faith Trust and Pixie Dust
(**)Pixie(**)
Written May 24th, 2005
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love eh, twisting us around like we were little dolls in its hands. not a lot we can do about it either but scream shout and kick
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hey this is really good i love it
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I like it . .. i know whatchya mean . . .
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trish you are not a terrible writer and you know it! this was good, not your best but still good, and if he doesn't like you he is cleary out of his mind, your an awesome person. i loved it sis, great job
~mystic
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good write sis..i liked it....i like the feeling of wanting, longing and needing in this peice...and just to let you know...he is VERY shy........
hope to see you at my promo tonight...love ya!!!
Forever
Tempest
Lil Kim -
great write sis it will come back to you soon it always does but i liked this im guessing this is about M.........K right....? right well yeah you will get over your writers block but momentaraly you should just be thinking about stuff you would like to write and just add on to it but yeah i liked this poem a lot great write and keep up the great work
In and Endless Slumber
Raven Miku
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If that is bad, I can't imagine what is good. I have no clue. I really liked this poem. Very good! Keep it up. And it wasn't bad at all!
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GRRRR...i wish i could Write better...this is not what i wanted to write...it doesnt say what i want..grrr....MIND come back to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Faith Trust and Pixie Dust
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