"WHEN EVERYTHING IS MADE TO BE BROKEN...
I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW WHO I AM."
(goo goo dolls)
My looks are for you.
My dance is so true.
I don't want anyone else
to see me, but
Only you.
yvonne griffin
11/22/02
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ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Written November 22nd, 2002
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Short, simplistic and to the point........If we danced for everyone.....how would anyone be that special person to us? Nice job Yvonne!! Lisa
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Groovy
Some people want to dance for everybody and others only dance for the one they love. Beautiful write.
Kali -
THe little ones get the point across so much better than massive writes. I love the simplicity. Write on, Rock on.
-Clinton -
Thats a pretty little poem. It makes a lot of sense but sometimes there is only one person who sees you and whether or not its the person you want to see you...youre better off with them. I love the song you added lyrics from. *cheesy thumbs up*
-Cat -
WOW...what a nice short poem,but so very direct....i like it...Jayydedd
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excellent
This is good, but you need to proofread it again. I think that you left a word out.
Damon D. Brewer -
don't touch it!
short but sweet!!! :) we'd dance in circles for that one special person LOL...well expressed Yvonne!! :)
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