engraving the ground
gently flowing through our world
gathering strangers
Author notes
warthm..
Written May 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Haiku!!! by .
300 points, ended June 7, 2005, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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tha was great babe..luved it lots..it sounded so pretty
-luv britt -
This is really good and says so much in so few wordes, just what a Haiku is supposed to do, I think. Best regards, always.
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OMG! i feel like an idiot! i promise you i did NOT take your poem idea! i swear it! i didnt relize that you had the same title as this! if i would have known then i would have pick i different title!!! srry if it looks like i stole your poem!
but i didnt! but i am glad you like it!
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I like this. I'm not really into haikus but this is one of the best ones I've ever read. Great write. It was really good.
~Dirty Kisses -
Best haiku ive ever read lol-Rebel
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well it was well written...i too have written a similar haiku with the same title
...i thought i had entered my own contest for a minute well all in all good job and good luck
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this is good.. i liked it alot..great job doll.. good luck in the contest.. xoxo stac
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