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Broken Angel

Broken Angel

Defeated and broken
I sit here once again
Facing the prospect
Of life all alone

It seems that my choices
Misfire and blow up
Making my heart
A pockmarked minefield

Never to know
The joy and the glow
Of love so true
And pure

So once again
I pick up the pieces
To start once again
A Broken Angel

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Written May 24th, 2005

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  • Julia Kay Endsley
    May 27, 2005
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    Thanks Vicky J. I hope it will get better soon as well. My husband is a hard head. Yes, it applies to me, but I am still holding on to a think thread of hope. He has always come to his senses before...


  • Vickie J
    May 26, 2005
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    This is so terribly sad. Not sure if it applies to you. Well worded. You captured the ache so well with the words you chose. Hope things will get better soon.~vj