Farewell
Remember me
With happiness, not tears
With the love in your heart I shared
Always
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Written May 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Last Words by Ava Noire.
300 points, ended May 24, 2005, 6 entries
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This is beautiful, lady. Great job on this one. I know you won't see this for a while but it is excellent.
Paul -
VERY BEAUTIFUL
So very beautiful my sweet and dear friend. It is always nice to see something new from you. I have missed reading new poems from you -
A very loving Cinquain
A wonderful way to be remembered
best of luck in the contest
Blessings
Tears
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A fitting epitaph for anyone. The best we can hope for when we pass on is to be remembered for the love we shared with those around us. It is not so much our accomplishments but how we touched other people.
So good to see you writing and leaving us with this gift before you go..
Mike
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Beautiful
Beautiful. These are wonderful last words and a very nice Cinquain. A wonderful entry for this contest. Best of luck. ~Pam
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yes, it fits now. Thanks
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Forever is three syllables. Otherwise, well done. It would be a great comfort to know that you are remembered with happiness and thus will live on in the lives you loved and left behind. Thanks for your entry.
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