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Anna

Anna Anna Anna
I could say it over
I could say it forever
Anna Anna Anna
Your body
Your...lips....
Your e v e r y t h i n g

Anna Anna Anna
You just should have stopped screaming
You just should have let me
Anna Anna Anna
You wouldn't stop screaming
Then you wouldn't stop bleeding
Anna Anna Anna
Your blood rushing over me
I'm rushing into you
Anna Anna Anna
I just couldn't stop screaming
You just wouldn't stop breathing
Anna Anna Anna
We just wouldn't stop bleeding
Anna Anna Anna
You have stop screaming
Anna Anna Anna
You just wouldn't stop being

Anna Anna Anna
I wouldn't stop
Anna Anna Anna
Until your heart stopped
But
Anna Anna Anna
You won't stop
Until my heart stops

Author notes

Gives me the chills.  Hope you like it.
Written May 24th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Oedhel
    May 25, 2005
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    You're welcome. I didn't mean it in a bad way, just to let you know. Obsession is one of the strongest emotions possible, that's why it's a good topic.


  • Bitter Sweet Angel
    May 25, 2005
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    i lkie it its interesting and kinda dark in an unusual way!!!


  • CountryCousin
    May 25, 2005
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    I get it

    Well okay and now one has to say perhaps this is what a lot of women say when someone is killing them. I think I get what you are writing here.

  • newuniverse
    May 25, 2005
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    that's the flavor i was going for. Thank you for your comment


  • Oedhel
    May 25, 2005
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    A little obsecsive.

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