Let me wear the moon
on a chain around my neck
a luminous pearl.
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O
Let me wear the moon
on a chain around my neck
a luminous pearl.
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. .
. .
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O
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Written May 24th, 2005
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This is another one that is just lovelu. I wish I could say so much in so few words. I guess I need to take lessons from you or something.
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Pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, clappy, clappy
I'm just feeling silly today, Rae. -
This is really pretty. I just wrote my first haiku. Stop by and check it out when you have the time.
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I love a full moon. It is a glowing pearl. Lovely.
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Superb
I like this very much you have captured the moons power and made it a very passionate love around you world. I give this Five Stars to match your moon ***** I so hope to read more of your work. Thank you for sharing this with my family and I. Keep up the amazing job you do. -
how beautiful is that!!
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wow this is beautifully penned!! it's just a beautiful haiku, i don't know what else to say!
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nice. a good write. i like this haiku.
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While not traditional your words still mesmerized my thoughts. Really elegant and full of romance.
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I love haikus. Yours was no exception. You mastereed the ability to conjure an gorgeous, if abstract, image in so few words. I have written several haikus/senyus on my own, and it woulf be my honor if you read some of them as well as any/all other poetry posted on this site by k-dense (myself).-Curtis Meyer
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Very interesting poem
Oh wow this is a splendid shape poem and yes the moon pearl would be interesting to see.
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