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Miss Me?

Rest my sorrows as time goes by
Of such a wonder a sissy have I!
Such wondrous flow of tales and prose;
Ever such, my sweet, dark rose.
Dreaming up new tales for me
And posting together, so easily.
Reading pages upon a note
Keep my thoughts on what she wrote.
Tarry by to spy anew
How does she make such wonders too?
Of all the poets I pass through, by,
Rose Dark Thorn's my adoration, my sky,
No, better yet, it's my sissy and I!

Author notes

Rose Dark Thorn sort of decided I'm her AP sister around here...and she stalks my AP hubby too! Oh yes, and we post on about four different group-based creative campfire (stories) together as often as we can.  And she and I read each others stuff.  I'm even writting up some poems based off of her work.  Oh yes, and trust me, Rose is the sweetest gal alive! [Did that make you blush, Rose?]
Written May 23rd, 2005

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 28, 2005
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    Well, hey, I'm not like my persona Rose! I'm not that hard to get along with! Sometimes I am, most times, never! I keep wondering how I ever got along without you keeping me occupied and laughing!

  • dragondancer
    May 27, 2005
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    Thanx

    Trust me...more to come in due time. Especially if Rose plans on coming back soon...

    Oh yes, and thanks for reading my stuff!

  • dragondancer
    May 27, 2005
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    Thanx

    You, Rose, are a gem amongs the common twinkling stars. I don't know quite how I got along all this time without you about to make me grin and shake my head...and wonder just how on earth I ever got along without you!

  • crimsonshadow
    May 24, 2005
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    Hehe, I read Rose's reply just after I read this, you two make me smile. So cute.
    -Lauren-

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 24, 2005
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    And I do miss you! I MISS YOU A LOT!

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 24, 2005
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    I'd squeal right now but you'd never hear it! I'd hug you extra tight right now, but you can't feel it!

    OH MY GOD! You made my morning sissy! I LOVE you! Thanks for that extra smile and laugh! 's extra tight.

    You know I'm going to have to pay you back now, right? I will get you back sometime. Sometime soon too!

    Thanks so much! This was such a lovely surprise!
    Edited on May 25, 4:12 because ''.

  • Eeyores Buddy
    May 24, 2005
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    Lol Just read your authors comment Lol
    The acrostic was very well thougth out indeed. I could find any spelling or grammar mistakes at all! I seem to check them too much Nicely done. Thanks for entering and good luck in m contest!

    Katy
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