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Cliche

Your such a cliché
And you know it well
But you don’t know how to change
Except to let time have reign

You’ve never felt a pure emotion
But what you’ve felt is enough
And now all that seems left
Is all consuming apathy

Author notes

ha ha liallynne really should not do anything this late, she tends to get... whiney.. and with whiney ness comes the inevitable whiney teenager cliche of my life sucks and theres nothing i can do about it
Written May 23rd, 2005

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  • Xombi13
    May 23, 2005
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    A good read

    I enjoyed this, even if it was as the author commented whiney teeanage prattle. Of course I find myself as such a cliche of apathy. Just long enough to get the meaning across, without getting cluttered with excess words, I like it.