When i look at you i choke
wondering what's gonna happen with you and me
Though my love for you may be a joke
i still love you i wish that you could see
As your words light up on my face
telling me to leave
I wanna run away and never come back to this place
but the pain just devours me
Crashing down i cry
wishing i had left with you
Now i think and all i can do is sigh
this all happens and i don't have a clue
As far as i can go
holding on to your love
That rips mine out slow
but now comes from above
Author notes
Um...... IDK i was feeling really bummy this day!!! LOL
Written May 16th, 2005
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this si great- i know im repeating myself but its great. and your a love sick puppy and you have a big heat... great poem
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This was a great piece!!It was so condenced, yet it told everything!Wonderful job!!
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Great poem i loved the emotion. it was really short i really wish it was longer because i just want to read more about it (i dunno) it left me hanging but otherwise it was good i just wanted more when i was done, but im still going to applaud...Create allways
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joley moley holey koley slowley bowley (idk just truing to rhyme with joley) haha good poem a lot of emotion in it but hey this is crackhead jade here lmao well good poems kzsdfbgvk jadf (just thought that was necessairy idk y though)
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