life is getting worse for me
with every day that goes by
i feel more people are hating me
and it just makes me want to cry
i look into my mirror and see
a person tearing from the eyes
and a person that so badly wants to die
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Written May 23rd, 2005
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cool poem its really good
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amazingness...
I like this.... I can relate....honestly, it sounds like something that I'd write. I think we have similar personality types...or sumthin like that! -
This is great! ( not the fact that you want to die). You'r a talented writer. how could any one hate you? From what I've read, you seem like a very nice, interesting person. If you ever have anything that you need to talk about, just let me know. I'm not always online, but if I am, I'll do what I can. Keep writing!!!!!!!
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great job!
Oh...is this really happening? I'm sorry if it is. If you're feeling depressed right now, I can help. I am too, sadly.
Anyway, hang in there. I'll be there to the best of my abilities! 
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hey I care about you! but i totally understand where you are coming from at times! anytime you need me just holla and I'll be there the best I can!!!
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excellent!!!
surely someone cares for you, excellent poet!!! who wouldnt? your writing looks awesome!!!
youve written down so many feelings right from your heart, true and pure.
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WOW this is really good!!! i feel like this alot!!! Good poem!!
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i feel like your looking through my eyes and soul writting this! this is great writting on top of being a very well sought out and common topic that no one likes to write about because they are afraid but i love that you are not afraid, im not afraid either, and i love to show how fearless i am by writting how unhappy i am and not being afraid of who says what! bravo ! you are brave!
~NH cowgirl~
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