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I Love You

I wanna travel the world
to be closer to you
go to every show, every concert
but you have no clue

Being depressed and bored
is getting really old
and if i don't have you here with me
my heart feels cold

The last time i saw you
you were about 10 feet away
i really with you took the time to realize, I LOVE YOU
so please come and stay

When i cry for your love at night
wishing i could be in your arms
wishing i could fly to you
for u  take risk, that mean no harm

I LOVE YOU
i wish you could see or feel that
my heart belongs to you forever and always
but my love to you is tat

Author notes

This poem is writen about the lead singer(Joel Madden) to my favorite band Good Charlotte!!!! I LOVE YOU JOEL!!!
Written May 23rd, 2005

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  • ForgottenxMe
    June 13, 2005
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    hahaha, this is sooooooooooo funny butget your claws off of him cuz hes mine. lol. no my best freind nobodyslove would kill you first. but great poem about MY man
    ~nerny


  • shouri13
    May 23, 2005
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    HA! JOEL! HOW DO I KNOW? YOU TOLD ME OF COURSE!(and i read the authors comments box but shhh dont tell kiara) lol teeheeteehee its good though like the rest i dont know why you put youre self down on all these poems you write theyre good and you shouldnt say that shit about the poems