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Won't Let Go

Lost in your voice Trapped in your soul

 

With out you, my life isn't whole

 

Can't let go, I will always hold on to you

 

So confused,  askin my friends what to do

 

Seein you with her, breaks my heart and it hurts me more

 

my heart broken when I see what you left me for

 

She don't do you like i do, She wont ever love you like i love you

 

you won't ever leave my memory like you left in the past

 

My love for you will always last..

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a little somethin really short my feeling
Written May 23rd, 2005

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  • simply-lovely
    August 26, 2006
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    oh my gosh i can so relate to this poem... wow i am kinda going though that feel i right now... hmmm guys suck...lol nice very nice poem.
    kristine
    best part.....
    Seein you with her, breaks my heart and it hurts me more
    my heart broken when I see what you left me for