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Church without papaw

There's an empty seat this Sunday.
There's a voice missing from the choir.
There's money missing from the plate.
There's one less hand to shake.
There's one more prayer request left unspoken.
So now there's one more angel in heaven.

Author notes

This is another poem for my papaw that came to me on sunday while I was siiting in church. Although it is not my best write it means a lot to me.
Written May 23rd, 2005

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  • Im Your Fault
    March 21, 2006
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    I truly do know how this feels. Sadly, theres nothing that can make it all better except for time. And the last line... And saying yay! Clappy smilies!!!
    Love ya gurl!
    Sarey


  • FullyAlive
    June 3, 2005
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    very good... i liked this piece alot, very sad and from the heart... i like it... good luck in the future

    ,,,^..^,,,

  • purdy girl
    May 23, 2005
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    that is so good. I totally know what you mean. good job it came straight from the heart and i could feel it even as i was reading it... good job!

  • is
    May 23, 2005
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    so sad im sure he'll b sitting there or keeping you company while your there and everywhere. its very emotional and personal. thanx for sharing and well done