Dear Him,
Are you out there?
If you are then will you treat me the way i should be treated?
Will you be honest with me?
When you kiss me will you put every ounce of everything into it?
Will you send me flowers on Valentines Day?
Will you at least call everyday?
When i am sad will you care?
Will you even try to make me feel better?
When i shiver due to lack of pleasure will you be there to cover me up?
Will you love me like nobody has ever loved me?
Will you live with me even if we could only afford a shack?
If you are the guy that will do all these things then please write back
Author notes
ummmmm......still hoping, praying and looking.......
Written May 23rd, 2005
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thankx babe!!!!!!!!
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AWW babe.. i luve you too!!! i know hes out there, i guess it just takes a while to find the right one..(im sorry im taken, and happy)!!..i know it is coming you way.. hes out ther waiting and you will know when he comes along!!!!!love you muches!!
~Oreo~ -
And don't feel bad i'm also looking for a guy like that!
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This is such a cute and truthful poem lonley i never read such a sad poem i feel so bad for you but you know i'm always here for you umm... i like the rhyming in this poem also and the emotion you also put into which makes the poem flow and truthfully swettie your poem flows great job and keep up the good work!
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thank you it really means a lot to me! thankx!!!
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THANKX HUN!!!!! you can be my man!!! and you can pick the weeds all you want!!
thankx hun!
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aww....baby..i am that guy! lol.. i will love you in our little one room shack for ever.. and pick you weeds (since we have no money for flowers lol) for valentines day..lol...
but this was a great poem.. i think we all ask these questions and wonder if that person is out there.. i know im going through that now... just dont give up... hes out there somewhere...xoxo stac
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this is a very good poem i thaught it was very good i love the use of words good luck and keep up the good work
peace and love
<3
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Awh, baby. This is soo good. I loved it. Remember, I am still looking, and this time it won't be someone that is bad to you and lies. I love you lots ♥ Shelby
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