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Kisses

My love
Your tender kiss
It makes me yearn for you
Your loving touch is all I need
Sweet love

Author notes

umm i was really bored so i decided to try this...let me kno what ya think please...PeAcE
Written May 22nd, 2005

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  • Kukana gold member
    May 22, 2005
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    This is very nicely written... makes me smile
    S~