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Love Discovered

Peaceful bliss realized in one glance
Perfect timing crucial for the chance
To fall for the magical perfection
That illuminates the sweet affection
Of that one true love.

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Written May 22nd, 2005

A contest entry

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  • natari gold member
    May 23, 2005
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    Lovely

    Well this was beautiful and very romantic


  • DarlingStac
    May 23, 2005
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    awww...this is so sweet... i like it ALOT... great job.. thanks for entering.. xoxo stac


  • Taranand
    May 22, 2005
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    Such perfection in such a short poem. It was truly beautiful.
    So pleased I stopped by for a read.
    I try to be a love poet but sometimes feel I'm more of a philosopher. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

    My motto is "one love" Peace and love Tara
    Edited on May 22, 8:03 p.m. because 'Spelling'.