I saw you from far..
Something stirred in me
I saw you from close..
The beat of my heart accelerated
I looked into your eyes..
My breath just stopped.
Your image just settles into my mind and through to my heart.
Our friendship bloomed a bit too far.
We hid nothing form each other..
Were always open..
Until the day, I found out
You are moving away
Sat there helplessly didn't know what to do
You went away from me..into your own world
I never said it once...how much I feel for you
But you never knew
And you'll never know
But your image is still here with me
Into my heart, that's where you'll stay
Where you were once and always with me...
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Written May 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- loving a friend by BreakingFree.
500 points, ended May 22, 2005, 15 entries
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Thank you very much for your comment, it meant a lot and a for not telling...well I didn't have the guts. It was a burden to carry, to know that there is no way the other person can return your feelings, well, thanks for your comment, it really meant a lot!
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Wow, this is heavy and forlorn. It's not fair not to tell him. He should know, you would want to know, I would want to know. It's a peice of information that I would carry unto the end of time. Plus the poem really flows like stream from atop the lofty peaks of your mind to the valley of your soul. Thanks. Pags
Edited on Aug 22, 7:12 p.m. because ''. -
awww so sad!!!!!!!! aww this is so sweet!!!!
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