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Dont Let Go

Here we are,
Under the stars
Wrapped within each other
I can feel your heart beating
This Feeling is so magical
I don't want it to end
But we both know it will,
You take me home
I cant Sleep
Your all that's on my mind
The phone rings
I hear your voice
"Hello? Are you there?"
Am scared to answer,But I will
"Yeah,am here"
Your Voice gets Softer
"I called to say I love you,Thanks and Sleep Tight,See you Tomorrow"
I Whisper Back
"I Love You Too,Just Please Don't let go"

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Ask Me And I Will Tell You. I dont Feel Like Typing it lol.
Written May 22nd, 2005

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  • RandomPoetGirl
    May 26, 2005
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    Ok, so what was this about? LOL. This was a beautiful poem, I have shivers. GREAT job!