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My Sister

My Sister died nearly two years ago,
My heart still aches I loved her so.

The dreaded C took her life,
She was a sister, mother and a wife.

To die so young will never be right,
I am struggling now with a fight.

Gone forever the times we shared,
My memories will not be compared.

I will love her now until I die,
But can't help keep asking why.

He life was full and she made the most,
I pray that one day i will see her ghost.xx




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Written May 22nd, 2005

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  • lizee-f-110
    May 22, 2005
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    i lik it and i am so srry it must be hard losing a sister keep writing you have great talent