Feel the music as we dance
Shaking, waving to the trance
Laser lights are beaming bright
As we dance away tonight
You're with her and I'm with him
Don't you know it's such a sin
Come on dance right back to me
For together we will be
Feel the rhythm, feel the flow
Moving fast, then moving slow
Deep excitement,feel it start
We just cannot be apart
You're with her and I'm with him
Don't you know it's such a sin
Come on dance right back to me
For together we will be
Lights are dimming, pulsing low
Beating, throbbing, soft and low
Feel you moving closer now
Come on I will show you how
You're with her and I'm with him
Don't you know it's such a sin
Come on dance right back to me
For together we will be
Author notes
Written May 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- Songs that Rock! by catlovergirl.
300 points, ended May 23, 2005, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your 100th poem by Loveandblessings2u.
975 points, ended March 16, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Very, very good write.
I can really feel this piece,
I love to dance.
Great job
good luck in the contest.
Loveandblessings2u & yours alway
Joyce
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This is a wonderful poem... well, song I'm guessing
I really like the rhythm and the flow 
the content is well dealt with and the chorus part is wonderful... I can imagine the music to go with this - very deserving gold trophy winner!
Keep writing
Polly
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Very good! wow! I'm imaging a beat and I feel like dancing! u might want to expand it a bit cause if its a fast song it is too short, anyway, great job!!!!!!! I love it!
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