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Together (complete)

The smells of passions fears
A haze smothers us around

Glowing orbs flash in site
Sins among us never ending

Together we shall walk into the night
under the spell of the shadowed moon.

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Now complete!
Written May 21st, 2005

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  • weetbix
    December 29, 2005
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    this is very strong almost cried! fabulous!!
    love weetbix!